Is there anything you would change about this cover letter?

Laura XXXX
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I am Certified Nursing Assistant who also holds a Medical Receptionist Certificate from XXXX Technical Community College. I have been working for the past 12 months as a full-time CNA. Prior to that I was a waitress for 18 months. I am also attending college at night, majoring in Medical Office Administration. I am looking for my first job in a medical office. I believe my background in health care, my education, and the people skills I developed from being a CNA and waitress will make me a good fit for this job.



Respectfully yours,

Try not to say I am this, I am that, I have done this; too much. It kinda' makes you sound a little boring. Yours is great, but this is what I would say: (Although, i am not a the following, I just put my name; and no, my last name isn't that long.)

Ashli XXXXXXXXXXX
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Graduating from XXXX Technical Community College, I hold a Medical Receptionist Certficate. I have been a Full-time Certified Nursing Assitant, for the past 12 months. Prior to that, I held a position as a waitress for 18 months. Currently, I am majoring in Medical Office Administration. I am in the proccess of looking for my first job, in a medical office. I believe my backround in health care, education, and my skills from being a CNA and waitress; will make a excellent fit for this position.

Respectfully yours,

Ashli XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

However Laura, I'm in 8th grade, so I'm sorry if it doesn't sound right. To others who are reading, I'm not a dork, I'm just really good at re-wording and writing business letters.