Check my gramar pleasee...?

in the second day, mam tess gave us a 50 item quize about what we have learned yesterday. then after that the clinical instructor teach us the instrument and their uses. they teach us the proper way of handwashing, gowning, gloving, instrument and sponge count and the proper position of the instruments.

last day of orientation we had a quize again. one by one we demo all the procedure they teaches us. after that they gave our schedule, the time for our duty.

at 3pm our clinical instructor, mr. magbag tour us in the TPH. he show os the operating room and he introduce to us the staff nurse of the O.R. we divided into 4 groups. i, edzann and j.m were assigned to group 4 and we had one major surgery a ceasarian section. we went home at 6:30am tuesday

our group was the first one that had a major surgery on that day. cholecystectomy, a removal of gall bladder. i am the circulating nurse in that surgery we started at 8:45 and finished at 10am. the 3rd we had a ceasarian section agai

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On the second day, Ms. Tess gave us a 50 item quiz about what we learned yesterday. Then after that, the clinical instructor taught us about the instruments and their uses. They taught us the proper way of handwashing, gowning, and gloving, instrument and sponge count, and the proper position of the instruments.

On the last day of orientation we had a quiz again. Everyone had to demonstrate all the procedures they had taught us. After the quiz they gave us our schedule.

At 3pm our clinical instructor, Mr. Magbag, took us on a tour of the TPH. He showed us the operating room and he introduced us to the staff nurse of the O.R. We divided into 4 groups; Edzann, J.M. and I were assigned to group 4. We had one major surgery; a ceasarian section. We went home at 6:30am on Tuesday.

Our group was the first one that had a major surgery on that day. It was a cholecystectomy, a removal of gall bladder. I was the circulating nurse in that surgery. We started at 8:45am and finished at 10am. On the 3rd we had a ceasarian section again.

Wha tha??

Yup. It sucks.

ummmm......???

grammar or spelling? Besides I spelling I would say you need to change some words. Like, I would say "ON the second day" not IN. Taught instead of Teach.

quiz not quize
taught not teach
taught not teaches
toured not tour
us not os

Where should I start? For one thing, you need to capitalize the first letter of the first word in EVERY sentence. Secondly, I don't know where you're from, but in the U.S. we don't spell quiz with an 'e' at the end.

i tried typing it over the way it should be, but there's too many mistakes for my time...sorry

Ok...Its spelled p-l-e-a-s-e. You added an extra "e".





Oh you mean that other stuff. I'm not reading all of that.

On the second day, Madam Tess gave us a 50 item quiz on what we had learned yesterday. The, the clinical instructor taught us what the instruments were and their uses. They taught us proper handwashing, dressing, and putting on glove techniques. Also, they taught us how to count instruments and sponges and the proper position of the instruments.

On the last day of orientation, we had another quiz. One by one, we were to demonstrate the whole procedure that they had taught us. After that, they gave us our schedule and it was time for our duty.

At 3 pm, our clinical instructor, Mr. Magbag gave us a tour of TPH. He showed us the operating room and introduced us to the staff nurse of the Operating Room. We divided into 4 groups and I, Edzann, and Jim were assigned to group 4 and we had one major surgery, a ceasarian section. We went home at 6:30 am on Tuesday.

Our group was the first one to have a major surgery on that day, which was cholecystectomy, the removal of the gall bladder. I was the circulating nurse in that surgery. We started at 8:45 and finished at 10 am. The 3rd day, we had another ceasarian section.

In the second day, Maam Tess gave us a 50 item quiz about what we have learned yesterday. After that, the clinical instructor taught us the instruments and their uses. They taught us the proper way of hand-washing, gowning, gloving, instrument and sponge count and the proper position of the instruments.

On the last day of orientation, we had a quiz again. One by one we demonstrated all the procedure they taught us. Later on they gave us our schedule; the time for our duty.

At 3pm our clinical instructor, Mr. Magbag toured us in the TPH. He showed us the operating room and he introduced to us the staff nurse of the O.R. We were divided into 4 groups. Edzann, JM and I were assigned to group 4. We had one major surgery, a caesarian section. We went home at 6:30am, Tuesday

Our group was the first one that had a major surgery on that day; cholecystectomy, a removal of gall bladder. I am the circulating nurse in that surgery which started at 8:45 and finished at 10am. The 3rd surgery we had was a ceasarian section.