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A study was undertaken by Maben and Macleod (1998) to explore the issues around the preparation of newly registered project 2000 nurses. They indicated in their study to the concerns about the newly qualified nurses clinical competency and identified the deficits in their clinical skills, life science and pharmacology, but at the same time showed that these skills deficit were made up within the first six months after qualifying and clinical supports. They stated that preceptorship has a significant role in facilitating post registration development of nursing practice and improving patient care

Without changing too much of what you originally wrote, this is an error-free edit....

The word deficit would be too strong a word to use in spoken English, but in this case it is ok.


A study was undertaken by Maben and Macleod (1998) to explore the issues surrounding the preparation of newly-registered Project 2000 nurses. They indicated in their study the concerns about the newly-qualified nurses' clinical competency, and identified the deficits in their clinical skills, life science and pharmacology. At the same time, however, they showed that these skills deficits were made up within the first six months after qualifying and clinical supports. They stated that preceptorship has a significant role in facilitating post registration development of nursing practice and improving patient care.

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A study was undertaken by Maben and Macleod (1998) to explore the issues around the preparation of newly registered project 2000 nurses.
They indicated in their study to the concerns about the newly qualified nurses' clinical competency and identified the deficits in their clinical skills, life science and pharmacology, but at the same time showed that these skills deficit were made up within the first six months after qualifying and clinical supports.
They stated that preceptorship has a significant role in facilitating post registration development of nursing practice and improving patient care

only one mistake in the second sentence!

A study was undertaken by Maben & Macleod (1998) to explore the issues surrounding the preparation of registered "Project 2000 Registered Nurses. Their study exposed concerns about the newly qualified nurses clinical competency , and identified the deficits in their clinical skills, life science, and pharmacology. At the same time, results showed that these skill deficits were made up within the first six months after qualifying for, and receiving, clinical support. They stated that preceptorship has a significant role in facilitating post registration development in the nursing practice ,and continue to improve.

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In 1998, Maben and Macleod studied some nursing students who are expected to be registered by the year 2000. The study was focused on finding out how well-prepared they are to tackle actual nursing duties right after registration. Based solely on academic preparation, It was found that the nurses were exhibiting deficiency in the areas of clinical skills, life science and pharmacology. However, the same deficiencies markedly improved when the nurses were made to take a 6-month Preceptorship Program. Being part of the Program allowed the nurses to actually experience patient care and other duties. This practical experience resulted in the significant development of their nursing skills.