What do you think about this song that i wrote?

The sky is black
the raven cries
no one is here to mourn her death
There are no tears
No broken smiles
No one cares that she has left this world.

Refrain
Honey; can't you see that it's too late?
She has already passed away.
So go fold your hands and say a prayer
in front of her lifeless grave.

The wind picks up and the lightning strikes
still no one seems to care
that her spirit is gone forever
like her final breath of air.

Refrain
Honey; can't you see that it's too late?
She has already passed away.
So go fold your hands and say a prayer
in front of her lifeless grave.

Morbid... but nice... in a dark depressing way...

How sad,...I pray for you.

The lyrics are OK but I can't hear the music. Turn it up.!

Its really sad, but i like. =) If you are a good singer... then u shloud post a vid of you singin it on youtube. then tell us cause it sounds purrdy! =)

rock on, soothe my soul!!

I'D LISTEN TO IT ON A DARK, DEPRESSING DAY!!!!

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