Rate my lyrics 1-10?

i worte many songs and this is random one yet i want to know how is it so, here it is

Come back

No, I never did harm to you
I never did wrong to you
How can you do this to me?
Is there where you want to be?
I cry, I crawl for you and you say
Now you feel free

Can鈥檛 you just come back?
You can so easily heal my wound
Don鈥檛 you feel anything for me?
You don't even know, what I have to deal
Since you left me

Please you come back or
At least tell me what I lack
It feels I don't deserve you
But I know I do

If this was what you meant to be
Then why did you say you love me
You let me cry, you let me crawl and
You say now, you feel free

Can鈥檛 you see I love you?
You never care, how much I do for you

Please you come back or
At least tell me what I lack
But I know I do

No, I never did harm to you
I never did wrong to you

Weren鈥檛 we so intertwined?
Since you left, I lost my mind
You tore my page
From your life for
No good reason.


please b honest

note: this just a random one, i can write really good songs so yes you can even give me in negation 'cause i don't have to prove myself i already did that. some one has rated 2 but i bet it's better than that and that he can't possibly write better than that and yeah i didn't mark you thump down.

awww its so sweet. 8!!!!! if a guy wrote that for me i would come back :)

6....u should make it all ryhme

Too many "come back's"

2

I'm giving you a 10 mainly because that sounds exactly how I felt when my ex-girlfriend and I broke up. Even though now I know those feelings of sadness over her were a waste of my time, this song sounds exactly how I felt during that time.

6 Its REALLY cute! But there are too many "come backs" . If i was the girl your trying to win back then youd be really lucky cuz i would "come back". Lol

are we allowed to give a negative answer? i wanna go with a good -10

wow they are good i give them a 10 i cant write like that

it's 10 no stir

it deserves a 10