Your thoughts on a song I wrote?

When did we last speak?
Has it been just a few days or maybe a week?
I don't know how long
All I know is that you've been gone
It seems dumb to say I miss you
Because I know you won't say you do too
And its dumb to say I care
Because I know you were never there

I held you up through all these dark times
I freed the demons from your mind
I held your hand when you were falling under
I comforted you through the rain and thunder
I was there for you all these years
I mended each wound and wiped each tear
But after all this, you see
It wasn't enough to make you love me

So now we're drifting apart
Slowly now, escape my heart
Don't bother with a goodbye
I know you wouldn't even try
You never did
You always hid
You didn't want me in
But I found a way under your skin

I held you up through all these dark times
I freed the demons from your mind
I held your hand when you were falling under
I comforted you through the rain and thunder

I was there for you all these years
I mended each wound and wiped each tear
But after all this, you see
It wasn't enough to make you love me

Theres nothing I can do
To change you
You'll never be there
You'll never care
Theres no point in waiting

I held you up through all these dark times
I freed the demons from your mind
I held your hand when you were falling under
I comforted you through the rain and thunder
I was there for you all these years
I mended each wound and wiped each tear
But after all this, you know
Its better off to let you go
You'll never love me

Simply Beautiful...very impressive dear...Great job!

wow love it

the lyrics are good!

GOOD JOB! =)

I've written some well known songs and the melody is the kicker. Lyrics are lyrics. Important, but you're attracted to melody and fall in love with lyrics!

woah , nice
idk how its sung, but that song is gonna be awesome

VERY NICE...

Lol Honey that's really very Good,I hope you find a good manger and producer.xxx