I wrote this song do u like it?PLz be honest and answer it's called I'm the Poison and ANtidopt.?

I'm a lot of things I'm a storm, I'm the sun, I am the needle that hurts you the nurse that fixes it, the knife that
caused the wound and I am the the doctor who saves your life I am the the poison that will kill you I am also the only
anti dote I know it's cinfusing but just listen closely and you'll understand what I'm trying to say to you
that you just didn't hear before. I tried to warn you but you just woudn't listen and I tries to show you but you couldn't
see I warned but you didn't listen you're steping in too a trap I can't let you do this even though you want too ypu can't
lie to me I can see deep inside of you I'm the poison that slowly is taking everything from you but I'm also the angel that
god sent for you, it's confusing I know but just listen to me and then you'll know what I mean, I'm the the storm, and I'm
also the rainbow you see after words, I am the needle that hurts you but I'm also the nurse that fixes it, I'm the knife
that caused the wound but I'm also the doctor who saves your life I'm everything I'm good and bad I am nothing on between
I know I can hurt you without even knowing it but I'm so confusing I'm the poison and the antidopt I am your worst nightmare
I am the dream you can't forget and I'm just here to say that no matter whay happens I still will care cuz I'm the demon
you're afaid of and I am an angel sent down for you I am the usloved case that I'm not sure how it'll end I'm the poison
and the antidopt but look what we've made this story turn into I'm sorry that I eve hurt you but now look where we are now
I'm warning you just don't take another step or else I just might hurt you why can't you see it in my eyes I'm about
to tell you that I've got to go but I just can't see you cry I know I should've scremaed louder but I couldn't I know
I'm weak but you'r even weaker for falling for me. I'm the poison that can kill you but I am also the anto dopt so please
just let me say that I never lied and I never cheated but now I hae to go cuz I'm causing too much pain so don't look back
we'll meet again cuz I'm the poiso but I'm also the anti dopt. I never wanted you too see but now it it's too late and I
have to go or I'll miss the bus. so don't worry about me cuz I know that I caused you so much pain and I know you love me
but I have to go before I cry, I'm the needle, I"m the nighmare that just won't leave you alone and I'm sorry but I'm also
glad I never wanted this but I can't fight what I am. cuz I'm the needle that hurts and I'm also the nurse that fixes it
I'm the strom and I'm the rainbow after it, I'm the knife that hurts you but I'm also the doctor who saves your life,
I am the poison and the antidopt and I'm sorry for that but I'm everythign that's bad and good so just please understand
me whn I say that I never lied and I always will care so just please don't cry for me cz we'll meet again I'm the antidopt
vut I'm also the poison that can kill you so don't say that I'm perfect cuz I know I'm not I'm the poison but I'm also the
antidopt so dont' you cry.

This song is mean to be sung like punk rockish kinda music, and no I'm not emo, and I meant anti-dote sorry for the confusion. Had to do it real quick.

its interesting....there's a few spellign errors i think..unless you intended it to be antidopt....btu i really dont think anyone knows what an antidopt is....do you mean antidote? cuz it woudl sound a bit better...it has more of a meaning..i am the poison and the antidote........like in a ralationship..you might cause the hurt unknowingly..but you also knwo you can take away the pain..make it all better

i like the passion you put into it.....it does sound a little choppy though.....i dont know...maybe it would be different with music....especially if you're goign for something punk rock-ish..then it would definitly be good with the music..btu if you are going for more of a poppy feel or even soft rock..it is a little choppy
good luck makign a final version! :-)

That was okay Report It

well to be honest it stinks

too wordy...try some editing...good luck!

i love it, i would buy it (as long as you dont make it sound like rap)

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scary
its ok you can smile, life is not out to get you little emo

Well all it seems you truly in Love with someone, and this is a dedication to the one whom you love. Yes it is very good. and you excel in translating your deep thoughts into words.

i kinda like it! i could actually see that as a song!!! (word of advice tho i wouldn't post any songs of yours on here cuz people can take them and when they are great songs thats not good. cuz i have seen people on here copy other peoples songs and poems on here. Good Luck! its good tho!!!) (is it about your bf?) its like almost sad kinda but still kinda happy. you know its hard to explain but i like it. btw im kinda emo... if you didn't already know lol. but thats cool! can't believe that person sadi that it was emo and it is ok to be happy!!! urgh what do they know bout emos! stupid labels and stereotypes!