My honest opinion...You have an excellent storytelling voice...very vivid. I could see exactly what was happening as you described it. My advice...the first seven paragraphs need to be conden...

Hopeless and too sad, but an excellent poem.The first and last stanzas are my favorite. Get those bad ideas out of your troubled head! I'd hate to think what would come of you if you ever los...

Can you continue it please....I want to know why she regrets it This piece was good by the way-not stop leaving us hanging.

Unfortunately there are a number of people here who suffer intelligence envy, and it takes very little to set the sad things off. In addition, the professionalism of the moderators can be called in...

please know that time really does heal the wounds... it makes you grow stronger... a lot of women have gone through these same feelings... loosing someone they loved, and thinking their whole world...

I'm no expert by any means but I can offer you the benefit of what's worked for me. We too bought an old country home. We've got fields that are planted twice a year. There are thick...

Insulate the house, install double or triple pane windows with UV filters, install insulated doors, install heat pump with ground loop exchanger, use brackish water (also called grey water) to flus...

All in my mind? I am a freethinker, so you may be right. I base my reasoning on the information that I have access to at that time. So, my "truth" is only based on what I currently kno...

Yeah, I would like to read the bible more && live like Jesus.

simple. there is no evidence, and the bible is ridiculous. nuf said

that someone = support, peer pressure big house with small rooms = deception socks on, looking down at your feet = uncertainty about decision making blood on ground = regret, attention seeking ...

You should call your Federal, State & local politicians and let them know that if they can't do their jobs. Americans will vote them out of office and put someone in their place that can ...

I think it is good you should put that to some alternative music. Find a band to help you.

I feel so incredibly sorry for you, to be so depressed at such a young age. Please, for your own sake, please contact a mental health professional right away. You may have a chemical imbalance or ...

Hey, I am 46 yrs. old and still consider myself a tomboy. I don't get into lacy things but I am quite particular about my appearance. You say you don't like being called a guy and on the ...